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Leena
    Jan 29, 2009 at 09:21 PM
  #1

Hello oriya nari team,
 Happy Basant Panchami to you. The effort you are putting into your site is really praise worthy. It is an excellent move towards women empowerment in particular and a platform for freedom of expression in general. The site has a vast scope for reaching out to the oriya ladies who stay in far flung places world wide. You have been catering the requirements  of the oriya ladies in broader aspects. How ever it will be nice to have a section containing short stories or serial novels written by emoinent oriya authors. This will make the remotely located lady to have access to oriya litreture . The site may also encourage them to experiment with their literal abilities and not limit them to  cullinaries. Leena from New Delhi.
Sasmita
    Jan 30, 2009 at 03:14 PM
  #2

Wow! bahuta bhala idea. bahuta maja lagiba. han poem section bi bahuta bhala laguchi. Mu nije bi kavita lekhe. kintu samaste poem lekhiparanti nahi. au madhya samastanku padhiba bhala lage nahi.
kintu short story hele bahuta jana lekhi paribe au bahuta jana padhiba pain bi intrested hebe. Mu bhabuchi eha dwara e site ra regular visitors nka sankhya bahuta guna re badhiba.

A very good idea
Oriya Nari Team
    Feb 01, 2009 at 08:30 AM
  #3

Thank you for the suggestion. But the point is, how many of us are seriously interested in short stories? Story telling and reading has been one of the most engaging and uplifting functions of human intellect. But in this era of fast moving times does one have the patience and time to read stories? May be in print  stories command readership to some extent; but not on the net.

Starting of a new page dedicated to Short Stories on our site is not a big problem. But the problem lies in keeping the spirit sustained. Without continuous contributions and regular visits by our visitors such a page may lose relevance in due course.

Just see what happened to a chain of story building exercises started by one of our visitors on 22 February 2008 on this Message Board under the subject: 'Make a Story' (still available at http://www.websitetoolbox.com/tool/post/oriyanari/vpost?id=2515087  ). Even after passage of one year there are not enough contributions and the story is yet to be completed.

Nevertheless the suggestion is appreciable. Let us start with very small stories (or 'mini stories' as we call them) on this Message Board. Let some one take the initiative to start posting such stories. We may go for creation of a permanent page dedicated to stories only after studying the response. 

ORIYA NARI TEAM 
Puja
    Feb 09, 2009 at 08:37 PM
  #4

This is a true story of Puja's life.

Nije bi bujhi paru nathae Puja kuade jiba kana kariba. Aji kahinki mana ta bilkul manu nathae tara. se kana emiti karichi je taku sabu pagali boli dakuchanti? 

Satare se kana pagali? na ae pagali daka ku se bahuta ghruna kari asichi. tathapi e tara picha chaduni .

Aji se ghara chadi, samasta nku chadi dura ku palejiba pain bhabuchi. 

Chalijiba keun eka jaga ku jauthi taku kehi pagali kahibe ni, kehi taku anya mananka saha  compare karibeni---- 

Tara hosh asiba dinathu khali se suni asichi  se intelligent nuhe, se pagali tae. tanka ghare se kemiti gote janma hoigala--- 

Kichi na bhabi puja madi chalichi agaku agaku. jau jau hathat jharana ra kulu kulu sabda re pada ti tara ataki jaichi.

Munda upra ku kari dekhe ta e ki jaga re asi se pahanchi chi?

E pruthibi na swarga? 

Bodha hue aku hin swarga kuhanti. e parjyanta se e jaga ku na dekhi, anubhaba nakari aga ku kemiti madi chalithila? 

Pakhare jharana tie bahi chalichi kulu kulu swabda kari. ta ku lagi amba tota. koili tara gita gaiba re byasta. 

Aha ----

Tike dura re chota chota  mati ra ghara.1-2 ta chota pila kahaku najar nadei khelibare byasta--- 

Au kana darkar puja ku? emiti gotie jaga ku hin ta jiba pain kete se swapna dekhithila. 

Gote amba gacha mulare jai basi padila puja. chari ade bichei padichi sukhila amba patra gudaka. 

Au majhire majhire dhira pabana ti tike jor hoigale bichari paduchanti .... amba kalasa mane jemiti ki puja ku swagata karuchanti. 

Hathat gachare thiba pakhi gudaku dekhi puja bhabila aha kete ananda re udi buluchanti e pakhi gudaka

Ta pare ta bag ru khata kalama bahara kari garei pakaila kateta line

 

Mu hoithaanti ki nila gagana pakhi

Udi buluthaanti sara pruthibi dekhi---

 

Puja nija ku nije biswasa kari parila ni. are e ta gote kabita pari laguchi.

Kalama tara semiti chaluthila safed kagaja tira mulya badhai--- 

Pura kagaja ti bhari gala gita re. chotia Puja ti pain anidela eka nua anubhuti 

Puni se bhabila.kemiti kejani kahara manare e pakhi  gudaku  mariba pain icha heuchi?kate nistura--- 

Puni kagaja olatai lekhila

 

Are are nistura sikari

Udijauthila pakhi ti

Maridelu tu taku dhari?

 

A e kagaja ti bi pura hoigala bina birati re--- 

Ta pare puja ku lagila: na se pagali nuhe. pagali hoithile se emiti gita kemiti lekhi deuchi bina bhabi bina rahi? 

Dunia pache jaha kahuchi kahu se pagali nuhe. na se pagali nuhe 

Puni pacha muha kari puja ageila ta ghara adaku-------------

 

Amita
    Feb 13, 2009 at 04:54 PM
  #5

Thanks  ...story ta bhala lagila...



Sasmita
    April 30, 2009 at 03:55 PM
  #6

HI Oriya Nari Team,
 
apana sata kahichanti.Net re story padhiba ate sahaja kama nuhe.
 
Ta pain bahuta time darakar thae.
 
Puni oriya language ku english letter re padhiba belaku story ra madhurata bi tike nasta hoijae.au ate feelings feel kari hueni.Bhala story te madhya tahara madhurata harai die.
 
Puja nkara story ku ame gote example bhabare nei pariba.

 

Sasmita




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