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tume jadi aasanta
ei bayasare...
sakti nathilebi
toli thaanti aganaara sephali
khaas tuma paain.
tumari kaandhare bharaa dei
naaee balire chaalanti
ketebaata..
suruja dubibaa jaaen.
munda rakhi
tumari kolore...
gapanti college ra kathaa,
busstand,canteen aau physics class.
mo khinna niswasara swarare...
tuma luhara sabda dei..
gita tie gaanta tume..
au
sethire mu soi jaanti..
sesa thara paain...
tume jadi aasanta
ei bayasare...
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| Sasmita |
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Wow Amrita
tumara e kavita ti bahuta badhia hoichi. laguchi jemiti jane prakruta re kahaku gote chahin rahichi tara jibana ra sesa muhurtwa re.
Bahuta bhala hoichi. Asa karuchi bahuta sighra puni tumara kichi nua kavita paiba pain.
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| Nishi |
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khub manachuan kabita Amrita! keep up the good work. |
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| amrita |
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Quote: Originally Posted by Nishikhub manachuan kabita Amrita! keep up the good work.
any way thanks. i ll try to come up with few good tears( kavita).
bye
keep in touch.
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| lisa mohanty |
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| Sept 16, 2009 at 02:35 PM |
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Amrita,
kali ratire mun tuma poem ta first time pain dekhili aau aji bhitare praya tini thara padhisarilini, mane bhabiparuthiba mote kete bhala lagichi.
laguchi jemiti ati nikataru tume tumara sesa katha kahibaku chahun khaa......s janaka pain . na kana..?
ok.. keep it up and make us thoughtful. haan jadi samaya mile tebe moro poem padhi suggestion deba nischaya.
L I S A MOHANTY
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| snigdha M. |
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| Sept 16, 2009 at 09:24 PM |
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Amrita
Lovely poem. Keep it up.
Perhaps you should also send it on to whoever it was meant to reach 
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| nita |
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| Sept 19, 2009 at 11:50 AM |
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Hmmmmmmmmm
Bahut bhala kabitata hoichhi.
Prathame padhiki bujhi parilini kana lekhibi.
Dui dina dhari aati kamre 15thara padhili.
Bahut bhala mane bahut bhala hoichhi
Hats off to you Amrita.
tume jadi aasanta
ei bayasare...
sakti nathilebi
toli thaanti aganaara sephali
khaas tuma paain.
Really a nice and unique thought.
I had read so many poems/poetry but this is really heart touching one.
Ones again Well Done Amrita
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