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aai paribartansila duniare emiti bi hue ...
sabu kichi badali jaae juga saha tala dei...
jemiti gotie nua dina ase gotie puruna dinara sesa pare..
gotie nua raati ase gotie puruna raati ra sesa pare..
puni ase gotie nua sakala,gotie nua surya
arambha hue gotue nua dina..
nua hoi aase raati au ta saha jaanha..
sabu aatita ra sesa hue bartaman paain..
sabu puruna ra anta hue nua ra jaanma pare..
sabu samparka bi.....
gotie nua sampark gadhi uthe gotie puruna sampark ka sesa kari..
jeebana pathare agei jiba paain..
nua kari kichi paiba paain..
samayara kala chakra saha pada milai
ama ku bhuli baku hue puruna sabu kichi ku
manibaku hue niyati ra sabu niyamaku..
nua anidie jeebanare aneka nua asa..
au dekhae agagu agei jibara disa......
kichi nuara swada paaibaku hele..
puruna ku bhuli
tara kasta bi sahi baku pade..
na hele ame sabu dina baandhi hoi rahijiba sei puruna madhayare............
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| sweta |
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| #2 |
hi very nice poem.its encourage lines.
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| smrutirekha |
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| #3 |
thanx sweta.
realiy i am waiting for some ones comment
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| sweta |
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| March 01, 2009 at 08:51 PM |
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hi, its my pleasure. can pls help? actually i want lakshmi purna in english that is english font as i dont know oriya . i can understand and speak pls can u help me.
regards
sweta
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| smrutirekha sahoo |
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| March 02, 2009 at 11:01 AM |
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where r u staying sweta?in orissa?if then .....buy an oriya laxmipuran cd or casset of NAMITA AGARWAL.n play it. i think it will help u... |
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| Shyama |
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| March 02, 2009 at 06:54 PM |
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Interesting...very much interesting.... |
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| susnata |
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| March 03, 2009 at 11:19 AM |
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Khub bhala hoichhi tuma kavita,ei kavita mote mane pakai die +2 re 'Nua Puruna" gadya jaha aame padhithilu.
Tala barada khasuchhi,
upara barada hasuchhi,
majhi barada bhabu achhi basi mo bela kala aasuchhi.
emiti sabu dina nua aasuthiba aau kali ra nua puruna hoi aamatharu bidaya nei jiba.
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| sweta |
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| March 05, 2009 at 12:14 PM |
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hi i stay in blore. thanks .
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| smrutirekhs sahoo |
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| March 15, 2009 at 01:37 PM |
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jeebanaku dekhichi mun,
raanga bhara sakalara surya pari.
jhalmal chak mak
ahankar au abhijatya re bhara.....
jeebanaku dekhichi mun,
raanga hina saratara badal pari dhala.
kebala jantrana ,dukha au karunaa bedanare bhara.
jeebanaku dekhichi mun.....
kaala amabasya ra raati pari
kebala pratarana ,abhaba au anatanare bhara......
jeebanaku dekhichi mun...
aanthudi salare.......
sisure nispapa hasare...
kebala ananda au ananda bhitare
khusi jemiti haata thari dakuchi
pakhaku asa pakhaku asa.....
jeebanaku dekhichi mun
juira chitare........
sabu samparkaku sesa kari,
sabu mora mora ku pachare pakhai
kebala matra tikie kala paaunsa hoi rahijibare......
jeebanaku dekhichi mun
kaisorara chanchalatare
ketebele se baana harini ta kete bele se prajapati
ketebele se chupi chupi kande ta puni luchi luchi hase
basanta asi chin jae taku
samastankara ajanatare........
jeebanaku dekhichi mun
bardhakyara parinata bayasare
aram chair re basi anusochana ra luha gadei bare.....
asa badira sahare re nijaku sambhali bare....
hye jeeban.......
kete tu chota.......aaji achu kali ki dui dina
kintu kahiki dekhau........
haasa,khusi.dukha au jantrana ra ai khela....... |
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| susnata |
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| March 16, 2009 at 12:15 PM |
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Hi Smruti
khub sundara heichhi tuma ra ei kavita,khub hrudaya sparsi heichhi.keep it up 
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| sasmita |
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| March 16, 2009 at 08:31 PM |
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| #11 |
Bahuta badhia hoichi.padhi bahuta bhala lagila.
Thanks
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| smrutirekha |
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| March 19, 2009 at 10:11 AM |
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bahut bahut dhanyabad susanta au sasmita
tuma dui janankara comment dekhi ki bahut khusi heli
bahut jana kabita padhu chanti kintu khub kam remark ase
kichi remark na milile lekhi baku bhala lageni
kintu tuma ADYA SRABANARA ..........
satare mona chuan
mu asile thare padhiki jae
kemiti bhabucha au lekhucha?
bhagaban tuma chala pathare sahaya huantu.
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| sasmita |
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| March 19, 2009 at 02:20 PM |
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Hi smrutirekha,
I think you are here after a long time .Nice to see your message.
Yes Susnata is a very good poet.And her poem's title is
Aadya Aashadhara Pahili Barsha chitta and not Srabana 
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| smrutirekha (samparka) |
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| March 24, 2009 at 09:59 PM |
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samparka tume jadi heba sagara mu hebi pahadi jharana tie,
jhari jhari jai misibi sesare dehare tumara.....
tume jadi heba niladheu mu hebi bela bhuin
tume chuin jau thiba dhoi deu thiba sabu dukha mora ...
alinganara sparsa re tumara.........
tume jadi heba kabi mu hebi kalpana tumara..
tuma kalama ru jhari asi lekhi hoi jibi
sada kagajare kete rangare kete rupare.......
tume sajei deu thiba mu saji heu thibi,
tume jadi heba mandira mu hebi ta pathara
tume jadi heba pratima mu hebi lagi fula ta padara..
tume jadi heba fula mu hebi mahak tahara....
tume hele bansi mu hebi sura tara.......
tuma jadi heba purusattama mu hebi pasani ahallya
tuma padara sparsa heba mukti ra patha mora...
tume jadi heba sakha mu hebi sakhi tumara....
kurusabhare koti bastra dela pari mote ghodei rakhiba
uttariya tale tumara....
tume jadi heba mora atithi mu hebi sabari tumara..
mitha fala pari khojimu anibi tuma paain...
dukha madhyaru khusi tie,luha vitaru hasa tie
nirasa madhyaru asara kirana tie,jantrana vitaru parasa tie..
mu rahibaku chanhyen hoi kebala smruti tie tumara.......
smruti
24.3 09tuesday |
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| Nishi |
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| March 25, 2009 at 12:26 AM |
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bhaut sundar heichi kabita ti Smrutirekha ! |
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| rima |
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| March 26, 2009 at 04:29 PM |
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khub sundara heichhi aapanaka kavita,hele mote lagila aapana aau tike sajai pari thante,mane bele bele line guda khub bada,to kebe chhoto laguchhi,aau purba para samnjyasa bi rahuni,hele aapanaka bhaba khub madhura lagila. |
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| SMRUTIREKHA |
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BICHARA SESA...
Bichara mora sesa hoichi, dandita mu heli mrutyudandare..... se bali heu ba faasi heu mrutyu kintu mora sunischinta. tebe emiti kahiki hela...... sabu bucharak ta mo nijara thile...... kintu bina dosare mu kahiki dandita heli mrutyudandare...... aaji heba mora sasti.... thik bali purbara pasu pari mote saja jaichi..... hatare sankha,padare alata au mathare sindura.. lokaranya o kolahala bhitare luchi jaichi
mo buku fata chitkara o luhara dhara. nali sadhi,nali odhani tale ghodei baana,rosani,sankha,hulahuli o mantra patha bhitare aaji hoichi mora mrutyu. mo mrutyu pare mu basi bhabuchi, muta kebala bhala paai thili.... jemiti chatak bhala paae barasaku... bharmara bhala paae phulaku.... nadi bhala paae sagaraku...... au janha bhala paae jochhanaku jadi bhala paaibare dosa nathila..... tebe bina dosare mora mrutyu hela kahiki? kehita thare saafai debara sujog deleni........ kehita thare sesa echa bi pacharileni.. kintu mrutyudanda hele sesa echa ta thare pachara jaae dosiku? tebe emiti kahiki hela........ sabu bicharaka ta mo nijara thile........
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| Sandhya |
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Hi All
Iam from Kendrapara dist, Orissa.Now after marriage residing in London with my husband who is also from orissa. Iam thankful to this site through which we oriya people come together in UK. I would like to meet other oriyas here.
thanks
Sandhya
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| smrutirekha |
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| June 15, 2009 at 11:44 AM |
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hye priya ......
mo paani tume.......
sukha hua ba dukha dia,
sanga hua ba nisanga dia,
prema hua ba byatha dia.
nidra hua ba anidra dia.
tume santi hua ba asanti dia,
asha hua ba nirasa dia,
karuna hua ba gruna dia....
asprasa hua ba sparsa dia......
tume bismruti hua ba smruti dia...
tume mo asamayare tike samaya hua..
mo sabu dukha bedanara anta kari.......
kebala mo paani mo pakhe pakhe ruha.........
smruti 15.6.09 monday |
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| sasmita |
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| June 17, 2009 at 07:01 PM |
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Hi Smruti,
tuma BICHARA SESA kavita ti bahuta bhala lagila.
word gudaka bahuta bhala hoichi.laguthila jemiti akhi agare sabu nachi jauchi.hele--
mu tike confuse hoigali meaning re.
mu jete dura bhabuchi marriage ku ethi murtyu bhabare nia hoichi
kintu se ta bhala pauthila taha hele bibaha karibare khyati kana?
na khali bhala pai chadideba ra icha thila.
bhala pai marriage hele taku murtyu saha kahinki tulana karajiba?
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| smrutirekha |
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| June 19, 2009 at 09:53 AM |
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bhala se paaithila kintu.... taku se painlani
paila se bichar ......au jananku baha hoi se dandita hela mrutydandare
mo bhabare tike abhab bodhe rahigala laguchi.mu next time tumaku nirasa karibini.
kintu bahut bahut dhyanyabad tuma comment paain
kehi kahile ta nije bhul jani paribi.
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| sasmita |
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| July 03, 2009 at 06:17 PM |
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Smruti tuma kavita gudaka bahuta bhala thae.bhala word use hoi thae.padhi baku bahuta bhala lage.
haan ae Bichara sesa kavita ti bahuta bhala hoichi kintu tuma bhabana bujhibare asubidha hela.
mote laguchi anya mananku bi asubidha heba bujhibare.
kichi gote word ki indirect hint deithile bhala thaanta kavita tire.
kintu baki sabu bahuta bhala hoichi.
Sasmita
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| smrutirekha sahoo |
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| July 14, 2009 at 05:23 PM |
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samparkare bhara ai jeeban jatra re......
parichita au aparichita nka bhida bhitare..
mu khojuchi tuma au mo samparkara parichayaku.
kuha kie tume?
anya sabu samparkara meghanada pacheriku dein..
kemiti asila mo manara agana bhitaraku..
dui haat badhaai dei gala biswas ra alingana tie.
binchi dela srabanara dhara pari..
asa ra kirana mo suska jeebanare.
aaimaa ra gapa pedi kholi sunaila jeebanara satyata sabuku,
ghanta pare ghanta bitaila mo saha nirolare..
mu bhuligali mo atitaku mo agata bhabiswata ku..
mu hajei deli nijaku tuma au mo bartaman bhitare..
mu bhuligali moo bhabanara pakhiraaj ghodaku lagam debaku..
tumeta pratisruti dei na thila na pratarana bi karina..
sabu dosa mora .....
jeebanara usnnata au madakata bhitare
mu bhuligali tume dine ferijiba........
mu bhuligali ama samparkara parichayaku.
sata kuha.......
tume kana kebala atithi tie thila...
mo sabu samparkara meghanada pacheri bhitare ?
mu asuchi kahi........
ferigala nida fera pakhi pari nijara nida ku....
naa.......
tebe kuha kie tume
kaana ama ai samparkara parichaya????
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| July 23, 2009 at 02:53 PM |
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Hi, e gita ti bahuta dina tale lekhithili.Kintu samaya au mana ra abhaba ru taku pura kari parini.bartamana ae gita ku complete kariba kama apana manankara. haan kintu gita ti au kebala gotie stanga re pura hele bahuta bhala huanta. dhanyabada. Puja Aneka akuha katha akuha hoi rahijae Sate ki tume ki bujhiba e otha ra nirabata ku lalayita hoi chahin rahithba e akhi duita ku Au e akhi re bhasijauthiba gada gada swapna sabu ku Icha hue pakh kari buji dei bandi baneidebi sabu swapna ku Kintu dara lage kale tume mo agaru chalijiba au mo katha adhura akuha hoi rahijiba Kejani mo hrudaya katha tume bujhiba ki nahi Bele bele jibana ta ati olada mane hue Jemiti samudra bali re bana ek khela ghara tie Kejani kau muhurtwa re bhusuli padiba Sagara ra ek chotia lahadi re----- |
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| Lipsa priyadarshini |
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| July 30, 2009 at 02:42 PM |
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hi,,,,, smruti
sarba prahame mora subhescha neba......
satare bahuta badhia hoichi abom kahibaku gale ehi kabita ti kebela mo pain hin .kahinki na ehi kabita tira prateiek pada mora angelibha bhali laguchi
anyway kabita ti padhiba pare mu kichi prasna pachariba ku sahasa paili....
dhanyabad
Lipi......... |
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Hi All,
I was waiting for a site where I can read Oriya Poems since la long time, Really appreciated your effort.
Please keep on posting..
Thanks,
Meetu
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| Nita |
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| Sept 03, 2009 at 08:55 PM |
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Hi Puja..............
Bhala Lagila kabita ta...............
Tara Shesa ta paain mun bahut chinta kriki kichhi lekhichhi....
Kemiti lagila nichita kahibe........
Sabu Ashankaa Sandeh bhitare
Aaji bhi Sajei rakhichhi Sabu Aashaaku
Khaas Tumahri Paain...........
Dekhijaaw Thare ta Hrudayara E Andhaari Gruhaku
Kete je Swapna ra Deepa jali rakhichhi
Khas Tumari Paain............................
Dahnyabad
Waiting For your Repaly Puja.........
regards
Nita
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| Avanti |
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| Sept 07, 2009 at 02:58 PM |
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Kahapain rakhichha nijaku sajai, tike ta kuha? Bahut dinara swapnaku? |
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| Puja |
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| Sept 08, 2009 at 05:21 PM |
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Hi Nita,
Thanks a lot.haan bahuta bhala hoichi.bahuta bhala lagila.
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| Nita |
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| Sept 11, 2009 at 09:34 AM |
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SmrutiRekha Madam, Aau Puja madam
Kuade gale aama nari kabi mane aau kichhi dekha saakhyata naahin..............
Aapanamane pachaaribe mun nije kaahniki lekhuni.........
aare mun jadi lekhibi padhiba kiye se?
Lekhika/kabinka mahtwa kebela taa pathka/pathika hin jananti.
Aapnamane lekhantu mun achhina padhiba paain kichhi mantabya deba paain
Bahut jaldi kichhi "KABITA" aasha karuchhi
Regards
Nita
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| Priyanka |
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Hi,
aeta mo nija anubhuti.mu gote lekhika ki poet nuhe.tenu mu taku kabita ki kichi bi banei parini.jadi kehi mo feelings ku bujhi ehaku kichi rupa dei paribe taha hele mote khub bhala lagiba.
agni ra sata fera neba bele katha deithili
sukha au dukha sabu bele tuma sangare rahibi. dine mote tume sneha re jabudi dhari kahithila sabu bele mo pakhare thiba au mu kahithili jaha bi hoi jau dunia olota palata hoi jau mu tuma saha rahibi au aji ?mu nije tuma dunia olota palata kari deli mu bi tani hoi jaichi e maya ra dunia bhitare prasna anichi tuma ku baha hoi kana mu paili ? kahinki baha heli?paschatap karichi mora se dina ra pagala pana pain kahinki jana?kahinki na tume dei parila ni mote 4 kantha ra ghara tie mana karuni,sundara kari tuma hrudaya re toli thila ghara tie khas mo pain
kintu aji darkar nahi mora se ghara. ati tuccha mane hela taha jabe mu parikhili taku anyara kantha bada ra chik mik mahala saha tuma hrudaya ghara mo pain dina ku dina chota hoi paduchi. aji chata pata heuchi mu ta bhitare mahala pain
jagrata dine mu fatei debi tuma hrudaya ku,bhangi debi, khanda bikhandita kari fopadi debi chari ade.
tume byatha ra saha chitkara karuthiba au mu atahasya ra hasa hasi dhain jibi kantha bada ra mahala bhitaraku
haan tumara jaha heu. tuma chala chala akhi ku padhiba pain mora kana au samaya thiba ? na icha thiba tuma adaku thare buli chahinba pain?
tume kana dekhila mu kana chaen?dei parila mote khusi tike?deiparila mote ghara tie? jadi heba sajadi deba tuma hrudaya ku .jaha tumara eka matra sampati jahaku nei garba kari asicha tume taku mote deicha boli
jao nei jao tume tuma sampati ku.jao nei jao.mukti kari dia mote aji mu sabu tharu khusi.milichi mote mo mahala.mo kantha bada itta pathara ra chik chak karuthiba mo priya mahala. |
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Priyanaka
Tuma anubhuti padhiki dukha lagila. Prathame bhabuthli anya kahara anubhutiku nija bhasa dei ghadile bhala lagiba.............
Kintu tuma nubhuti padhiki ichha heleani kichhi lekhibaaku...............
Tume prema sneha ku samarpana karidela e parthiva / bastbadi duniya nikatare.
Nijara ghara karibaku kahaku bhala na lage kintu sethipaain kebe nija aapnara kahaku chhadi ta huani.
Aapnara lokaku chhadi dele se ghare rahiba kiyese?
Kebala kantha bada ku nei rahi huni.
Laguchhi parthiva samapti paain tume puruna samparka chhadi deichha. Kintu jaha pakahre tume paaila siye jadi puni tumaku chhadidiye kana kariba tume.
Aau kichhi lekhiparuni.
Bahut bhul kala tume priyanka.
-Regards
Nita
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| Priyanka |
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Hi Nita,
bhala lagila tuma message padhiki.tuma honest reply dekhi ki.
kintu gote katha jana?mu mo husband nku bahuta bhala pae.nija jibana tharu bahuta guna re adhika.ama marriage ku 4 barsa hoigala.mu sabubele tankara pratyaka dukha ra sathi hoi asichi.jetebele tanka pakhare job nathila sebe tharu.ama marriage ra bahuta purbaru.
kali mora jane ati close bombay re bunglow kiniba pain asithile tankara already 2 ta flat achi.kintu biswasa kara mu mo husband nku kichi kahini.khali etiki kahili semane Bunglow kinuchanti.bass.
kintu mo mana re e prasna barambara asila mu kahinki tanku baha heli.jete chesta karile bi durei parili ni sei prasna tiku.au tara main reason thila ghara(jadio anya chota chota reason bi included).mu chua belu bhabi asichi mo nijara gote ghara.se ama chakiri ra 4 barsa pare bi gote ghara kari parile ni jadio ama 2 jana nka salary misei 55000 P/M ru adhika.au aji sakale jetebele se kahile(au kandile) se mora asa purana kari paru nahanti mote nija ku bahuta ghruna lagila.sethipain mu nijaku gali dei se purba message ti lekhithili.
tume jadi au tike deep ku jai thaanta taha hele bujhi paranta
Kintu thanks tuma reply pain.
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