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| Sept 27, 2009 at 05:00 PM |
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H A J I L A S M R U T I
smruti kebe haje nahi.....
ame haji jau ai smruti ra bhitare.
kebe smruti feri ase saratara bhasa badala re......
kebe puni laha laha kasatandi fulare.
ase puni sakala suryara raktima abhare...
mukata ra bindu pari..
sisira bhija sabuja ghasare,surya mukhi fulara hasare,sabuja sua re,
ganga siuli fulara mahaka re,budhiani ra jala re,
bainsi ra sura re ,madala ra tala re,
ba mandira ra ghanta dhawni re athaba mantra pathare........
smruti sabu ghuri jae chaka pari pachaku pachaku......
kichi smruti hue ta feri asiba puni sata hoi..
purnima ra chanda pari,amabasya ra tara pari,
kuhudi ghera situa sakala pari,
baisakhara khara pari ba srabana ra dhara pari.
kintu tume kana kebe stare feriba mora ai Nisanga jibana re..........
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| smrutirekha |
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N I R A B A T A . . . . . .
tuma nirabataku ,
mu jadi kebe padhi paranti..
sabdare sajai lekhanti
kabita tie tumaki nei.
tuma nirabataku mu jadi kebe padhi paranti..
endradhanura sata raanga re
sajai aakanti chabi tie tumari paain.
tuma nirabataku mu jadi kebe padhi paranti..
kichi smruti re sajai lekhanti
galpa tie amaku nei.
tuma nirabataku jadi mu kebe padhi paranti..
khoji mu diaanti santi ra
nida tie tumari paain.
bandhi rakhibi ki tuma nirabataku ,
mo panata kanire.....
na topa topa luha dei dhoi debi.....
kemiti padhi bi mu tumara ai dirgha nirabataku.......
thare mote bujhei kahibaki.
smruti
9.10.09
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| Rashmi |
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Hi Smruti,
Your Kabita "Nirabata" is really nice one. I like this one very much. have u ever written any kabita on "BAPA" OR "BOU". Am a very emotional, sensitive kind, please do let me know where I can find such kind of Kabita.
Pease send some links where oriya kabita is published.I would ike to read all.
Thanks
RP
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